The table below shows the numbers of visitors to ashdown museum during the year before and year after the refurbished. The chart show result of survays asking how they were satisfied with their visit during the same two period The table below shows the numbers of visitors to ashdown museum during the year before and year after the refurbished. The chart show result of survays asking how they were satisfied with their visit during the same two period
The introduced data reveals how many
people
visited the Ashdown Museum
before and after the year
of reconstruction
. The pie chart illustrates the level of satisfaction of the surveyed.
In fact, the Ashdown Museum
was visited by approximately 200, 000 people
during two years period. Overall
, the percentage of visitors who were satisfied increased by 10% after the year
of reconstruction
, making 40
% of the surveyed.
Change preposition
up 40
According to
the statistics, before the year
of refurbishment, the museum
was visited by 74, 000 people
, which is less at
18, 000 visitors who have been to the Change preposition
than
museum
the year
after the reconstruction
(92, 000 people
).
Regarding the results of surveys, the percentage of dissatisfied people
significantly decreased by almost three times, comprising 40% and 15% in two introduced periods. Moreover
, the amount of those people
who were very satisfied reached 35% after the year
of renovation, compared with 15% of the same visitors’ satisfaction before the refurbishment. Actually, the year
before recomposition very dissatisfied people
were twice as big as those after the year
of rebuilding - 10% and 5% respectively. It is notable, that 5% of the surveyed did not give any response in both years before and after reconstruction
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