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The table below shows the numbers of visitors to ashdown museum during the year before and year after the refurbished. The chart show result of survays asking how they were satisfied with their visit during the same two period The table below shows the numbers of visitors to ashdown museum during the year before and year after the refurbished. The chart show result of survays asking how they were satisfied with their visit during the same two period

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The introduced data reveals how many
people
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 visited the Ashdown
Museum
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 before and after the
year
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 of
reconstruction
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. The pie chart illustrates the level of satisfaction of the surveyed. In fact, the Ashdown
Museum
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 was visited by approximately 200, 000
people
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 during two years period.
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, the percentage of visitors who were satisfied increased by 10% after the
year
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 of
reconstruction
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, making
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up 40
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% of the surveyed.
According to
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 the statistics, before the
year
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 of refurbishment, the
museum
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 was visited by 74, 000
people
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, which is less
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than
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 18, 000 visitors who have been to the
museum
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 the
year
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 after the
reconstruction
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 (92, 000
people
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). Regarding the results of surveys, the percentage of dissatisfied
people
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 significantly decreased by almost three times, comprising 40% and 15% in two introduced periods.
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, the amount of those
people
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 who were very satisfied reached 35% after the
year
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 of renovation, compared with 15% of the same visitors’ satisfaction before the refurbishment. Actually, the
year
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 before recomposition very dissatisfied
people
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 were twice as big as those after the
year
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 of rebuilding - 10% and 5% respectively. It is notable, that 5% of the surveyed did not give any response in both years before and after
reconstruction
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, museum, year, reconstruction with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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