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Many teachers assign homework to students everyday. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students?

#teachers #homework #students
It is argued that many tutors give
hometask
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homework
 to
students
everyday
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. I agree with
this
 statement and think it is essential for
students
 because it helps
student
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 complete their daily
lesson
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 and
engaged
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 them with learning. In the beginning, daily homework helps
student
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the student
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 complete their daily study. If a student
do
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does
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 his
hometask
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homework
 he may research
on
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apply
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it, find out the problems give a particular time on
topic
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 which is assigned by his teacher and it is beneficial for him to continue his
studies
 daily basis.
Besides
, after the classroom learning learners recap
whole
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 topic during their homework which is important
of
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the learnjng
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learnjng
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learning
 process.
For example
, a proverb goes to : practice makes a man perfect, which is done by
students
 during their
hometask
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homework
.
Furthermore
, it
engage
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students
with
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in
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learning
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the learning
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 process. A
students
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student
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 goes school
learning
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learns
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 there and after
came
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comes
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 back home
doing
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to do
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 his homework,
complete
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completes
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 his assignment which
are engage
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 the
students
with
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in
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 gaining knowledge. There is no limitation of gaining knowledge and
this
is enriched
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enriches
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 their capabilities and brain
also
.
Moreover
, when they
busy
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 with their
studies
 it is quite possible to
attract
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attracted
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with
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to
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 social media and
others
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other
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 bad
habit
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habits
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.
For example
,
a
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apply
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research which was conducted by
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the childreen
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childreen research center
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Childreen Research Center
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 in
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the previouse
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previouse
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previous
 year
explore
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 that
students
 who are spending more time in their learning, getting less
atracted
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attracted
with
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to
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 bad things
such
 as
drug
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drugs
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,
crime
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and crime
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. In conclusion, it is beneficial for the
students
 that
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the teacher
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teacher
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teachers
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 assign
the
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apply
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homewrok
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homework
everyday
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 as it
bear
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blessing
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a blessing
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 for learners. Regular
hometask
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homework
keep
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keeps
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 them on
studies
as well as
 learning
process
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processes
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 and
engage
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engaging
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 with
studies
 which
increase
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 their creativity and does not allow
to
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them to
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attract
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be attracted
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with
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to
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 bad habits.
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Sentence Structure
Try to use a variety of sentence structures to make your essay more engaging.
Grammar/Spelling
Be mindful of spelling and grammar. Errors such as 'hometask' instead of 'homework', 'learnjng' instead of 'learning', can detract from your overall message.
Coherence
Consider using transitions and signposting language more explicitly to guide the reader through your arguments. Phrases like 'Firstly', 'In addition', 'Furthermore', can help with the flow of your essay.
Specific Examples
Support your arguments with more detailed examples and explanations. General statements are a good start, but specifics add credibility and depth to your essay.
Introduction
Successfully introduced the topic and clearly presented your stance at the beginning.
Conclusion
You concluded your essay effectively, summarizing your main points and restating your position
Use of Examples
Made a good effort to use relevant examples to support your arguments, such as the study by the Children's Research Center.
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