The graph below shows the percentage of households with different kinds of technology in the U.S. from 1995 to 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The given line graph illustrates the percentage of households with different kinds of technology in the United States of America between 1995 and 1999.
Overall
, every sector showed an upward trend except for the figure for DVD
players. It is notable that the figure for the internet surpassed that of DVD
players twice.
When it comes to the washing machine, it was the most popular household in the U.S throughout the given timeframe: it stood at 60 per cent
in 1995 and reached its peak at 80 per cent
in 1999. Regarding phones, only around one-fifth of the U.S. people owned phones in the beginning. However
, its rate gradually increased and surpassed that of computers in 1999, by about 75 percent.
Furthermore
, although
the DVD
player experienced a slight decline in 1996(15 per cent
), it then
recovered its rate and illustrated a constant climb. It is noteworthy that the Internet, the least-possessed furniture among U.S. citizens in 1995, increased continuously and grew as same as the DVD
player in 1998. After reaching 30 per cent
in 1998, it has successfully overridden the figure for DVD
players and reached its peak at 50 per cent
in the end.Submitted by aahhyu111 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words dvd, cent with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "illustrates" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
▼