The graph below shows the percentage of households with different kinds of technology in the U.S. from 1995 to 1999.  Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The

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bar chart illustrates the ratio of households with five different types (washing machine, computer, phone, Internet, and DVD player) of technology in the U.S. between 1995

to

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and

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1999. Looking at the

overall

perspective, it is readily apparent that all of the

households ratio

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household ratios

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steadily increased in comparison with the beginning of the period. A

cursoty

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cursory

glance at the data reveals that washing

machine

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machines

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had the highest

rate

during the given period and accounting

from

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for

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60% in 1995 to 80% in the year 1999. A more detailed look at the graph

reveal

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reveals

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that

percentage

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the percentage

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of

phone

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phones

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started at under 20% in 1995 and

this

was the second

lower

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lowest

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rate

.

However

,

this

rate

dramatically increased between 1996 and 1999

at

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to

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about 75% in the year 1999. Another eye-catching trend is that

DVD

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the DVD

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palyer

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player

rate

substantially dropped

of

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by

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about 10% from 1995 to 1996

however

,

after

this

period, the ratio steadily rose up at 40% for the year 1999.