The two pie charts below show changes in world population by region between 1900 and 2000. Summarize the information by choosing and reporting the key features and make any relevant comparisons.
The two pie charts show the total
population
in the world by region between 1900 and 2000. Overall
, the number of world citizens increased about fivefold, and there was also
a new area for the Middle East and North Africa.
The highest population
rate was seen in Asia Pacific. Although
it fell from 60% to 54%, it still overwhelmed in 1900 and 2000. With regards to Europe's population
, it accounted for 25% in 1900, but it decreased by about double in 100 years. In contrast
, the figure for North America showed no change, at 5%. The proportion of Africa and
Latin America and the Caribbean went up by 6% and 5%, respectively. Correct word choice
apply
Furthermore
, the proportion of the population
in the Middle East and North Africa rose by 6%. With regard to other countries, the figure was the same between 1900 and 2000.Submitted by heoeunsae on
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