The graph below shows the percentage of households with different kinds of technology in the U.S. from 1995 to 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the percentage of households with different kinds of technology in the U.S. from 1995 to 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The line graph details the proportion of families who have various technologies (washing machines, computers, phones,
Internet
and
DVD
players
) in the country named United States of America. The data is relevant for the period of time between 1995 and 1999.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the most widespread type of equipment among households was a washing machine.
In
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contrary
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, Two kinds of technology which competed for
last
place were the
Internet
and
DVD
players
.
Initially
, in 1995, the
Internet
made up only 10% and the closest thing to it was a phone, which overtook the
Internet
almost twice as much.
However
, in 1996, interest in
the
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DVD
players
at home fell
significant
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, by about 10%. Simultaneously with the
DVD
player's fall in popularity, the
Internet
grew to about 18%. From 1997 to 1998,
DVD
players
and the
Internet
had the same rate, and only
at the end
of 1998 year, they branch off.
Finally
, in 1999, the
Internet
exceeded the
DVD
players
by 10%. In 1995, the gap between first and second place computer and washing machine respectively was 20%. In 1999, phones from the bottom position reached second place and overtook computers.
However
, a washing machine was 80% and during the whole period held the lead position
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Percentage
  • Households
  • Technology adoption
  • Growth rate
  • Decline rate
  • Milestones
  • Obsolete
  • Societal factors
  • Economic conditions
  • Advancements
  • Consumer preferences
  • Market saturation
  • Trend analysis
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