The graph below shows the percentage of households with different kinds of technology in the U.S. from 1995 to 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The line graph details the proportion of families who have various technologies (washing machines, computers, phones,
Internet
and Use synonyms
DVD
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players
) in the country named United States of America. The data is relevant for the period of time between 1995 and 1999. Use synonyms
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the most widespread type of equipment among households was a washing machine. Linking Words
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contrary
, Two kinds of technology which competed for Correct article usage
the contrary
last
place were the Linking Words
Internet
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DVD
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players
.
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Initially
, in 1995, the Linking Words
Internet
made up only 10% and the closest thing to it was a phone, which overtook the Use synonyms
Internet
almost twice as much. Use synonyms
However
, in 1996, interest in Linking Words
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DVD
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players
at home fell Use synonyms
significant
, by about 10%. Simultaneously with the Change the word
significantly
DVD
player's fall in popularity, the Use synonyms
Internet
grew to about 18%. From 1997 to 1998, Use synonyms
DVD
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players
and the Use synonyms
Internet
had the same rate, and only Use synonyms
at the end
of 1998 year, they branch off. Linking Words
Finally
, in 1999, the Linking Words
Internet
exceeded the Use synonyms
DVD
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players
by 10%.
In 1995, the gap between first and second place computer and washing machine respectively was 20%. In 1999, phones from the bottom position reached second place and overtook computers. Use synonyms
However
, a washing machine was 80% and during the whole period held the lead positionLinking Words
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