The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by local authorities in Someland in 1980, 1990 and 2000.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by local authorities in Someland

in 1980, 1990 and 2000.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,

and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate the annual expenditure of residents in
Someland
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Homeland
. The figures are presented in 3 consecutive years with ten-year intervals, starting from 1980 to 2000.
According to
the pictures, it can be seen that local people mostly spend their money on
the
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Higher Education.
On the other hand
, the Environmental services and Other categories are likely to be the least. In the year 1980,
the
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Higher Education occupied
at
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35%,
then
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to nearly
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half of all spending in 1990. After that, decreased to 40% in 2000. Health and human resources had the same trajectory as education. Start the period from 14% in 1980 and rose to 20% in 1990. Eventually, it dropped by half in the year 2000. Looking at the Environmental services, accounted for 4% in 1980 and jumped up to 5% in 1990. In 2000, it was increased to 9%.
On the contrary
, the trend of other expenditures was reversed. It was at 6%,
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by 2% and 3% in 1990 and 2000 respectively
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