The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museum
The provided diagram presents data about the
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
to four international Use synonyms
museums
(Use synonyms
Louvre
, Vatican Use synonyms
Museums
, London Science Use synonyms
Museum
, and Shenzhen Use synonyms
Museum
) from 1980 to 2015.
Looking from an Use synonyms
overall
perspective, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
Use synonyms
gone
to Verb problem
apply
Use synonyms
Louvre
and Vatican Correct article usage
the Louvre
Museums
Use synonyms
were
gradually climbing, Correct subject-verb agreement
was
while
visits to Linking Words
London
Science Correct article usage
the London
Museum
were reducing over time. Use synonyms
Moreover
, Shenzhen Linking Words
Museum
was visited by approximately the same Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
in 35 years.
Getting back to the details, it is observed, Use synonyms
there
Correct word choice
that there
were
an upward tendency in the Change the verb form
was
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
to the Use synonyms
Louvre
, except Use synonyms
of
between 1995 and 2000. In 1995, Remove the preposition
apply
Use synonyms
Louvre
Correct article usage
the Louvre
Museum
was visited Use synonyms
nearly
less than 8 million people, their Change preposition
by nearly
number
Use synonyms
reached
a peak of almost more than 9 Wrong verb form
will reach
millions
, in 2025. The table data clearly shows that at the beginning of the period, as nearly 5 million people visited Change to singular
million
to
Vatican Remove the preposition
apply
museums
, the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
to Use synonyms
this
place Linking Words
were
climbing in 35 years and hit a high of approximately 9 Correct subject-verb agreement
was
millions
in 2015.
It is clear from the data, visits to Change to singular
million
London
Science Correct article usage
the London
Museum
were deteriorating over time even though there Use synonyms
were remain
unchanged Wrong verb form
remained
visitors
, which of 4 Use synonyms
millions
, in the first 5 years. Change to singular
million
At the end
of the period, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
to Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
museum
Use synonyms
were
less than half the beginning of Change the verb form
was
this
. As can be seen in the diagram the Linking Words
number
Use synonyms
to
Shenzhen Change preposition
of
Museum
Use synonyms
were
stabilizing, and their numbers were the same Correct subject-verb agreement
was
number
of nearly just 4 million in 1995 and 2015.Use synonyms
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