You need a website for your business, and you would like to ask your friend to build it. Write a letter to your friend. ▪️Include a brief description of your business ▪️Explain what you would like to have on the website ▪️Provide some ideas on the use of images on the website.
Hi John
How are you? I hope everything is well with you. I'm writing to ask you to give me a hand. As I told you before, I've run my own business in the retail market and I need to have a sales
website
to extend my job.
There are a large number of rivals in this
field, so I need to have something which separates me from the others. Besides
, since our region is extremely crowded , especially at night, people prefer to buy their stuff online rather than going out to purchase a humble need.
If you can help me build a website
, I'll be one of the first shops which use the internet and technology for residents' comfort. Also
,the website
should be connected to the banks in order to let citizens pay the costs online.
I guess if we have some daily discounts on the website
, people will be encouraged to be our customers. In addition
, we can have some offers for the last
days of every month.
Oh, I can't wait for these changes. I'm sure with your assistance I will be successful in my career and soon more and more customers will be attracted to my shop.
Please let me know whether you desire to do me a favour or not. Look forward to hearing about your opinion.
Best wishes
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coherence and cohesion
To enhance the coherence, consider using more transitional phrases between sections for smoother flow.
task achievement
For an even stronger task response, you might include more specific examples or features you'd like to see on the website.
coherence and cohesion
The letter provides a clear structure, with each paragraph focusing on a different aspect, going from introduction, to the business description, to specific website features and concluding with a call to action.
task achievement
The letter successfully addresses the three bullet points from the prompt, showing a good understanding and complete response to the task.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.