The map below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams illustrate how the site of the southwest airport will change in future.
Overall
, there will be extensive changes in terms of transportation and commercial facilities
as well as
gates. Now, there is one entrance and one exit both in the southern
part
of the map. A cafe and a check-in area are located on the west side.
In addition
, a walkway runs from the north to the south in the top of the map. For the next year, there are plans to add another entrance and exit just beside the previous ones. The southeast
part
of the airport will be expanded in order to make way for a car hire area.
Also
, a new cafe and an ATM are going to be built in
this
part
. The old cafe and check-in
part
will remain on the southwest side.
However
, a bag drop
part
is going to be developed there. The walkway will be replaced by a sky train and ten new gates are going to be constructed which will necessitate the extension of the northern
part
of the airport.
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