The two pie charts below show changes in world population by region between 1900 and 2000. Summarize the information by choosing and reporting the key features and make any relevant comparisons.
The pie charts provide data on the transformation of people’s global populace in some regions in two different centuries.
It is clear that
in 2000, the number of citizens in the whole world have
reached 6 billion, Unnecessary verb
apply
whereas
in
the previous century, Add the comma(s)
, in
this
figure was less by almost a quarter. In 2000, Asia
Pacific region represented more than half of the total, considering that, the second biggest part of the populace in the same year had counted only 14%. In the previous age, North America made up a very small proportion (5%).
Correct article usage
the Asia
According to
the figures, in the year 1900, Asia pictured a very large majority of the total with 60 per cent. But it is evident that Europe’s amount of individuals comprised a quarter of the total. At the same time, Africa had a minimum quantity of 5%.
Overall
, while
the difference in number of global population between two years accounted for roughly 4 times, the situation in the distribution of people by region has not significantly changed.Submitted by eparfenenkov on
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