Some people think that current environmental issues are global problems and should therefore be dealt with by the government, while others believe that these problems can only be tackled by individuals. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Environmental concerns have affected worldwide leading to serious outputs
such
as global warming, massive destruction of the atmosphere, and intensifying the greenhouse effect, etc. Although
many solutions have been proposed, many people argue that these should be executed by governments, while
many others suggest that both counterparts should apply some techniques in order to decelerate the rate of environmental destruction.
To start with, pollution has risen into
uncharted levels owing to the massive production of big companies, industries, or factories. Change preposition
to
Then
, some laws have to be set up to establish control and change the resources that are used by them. For instance
, McDonalds, Nestle, or Coca Cola
must be under regulations in which they have to use renewable energies by fossil fuel, coal and gas combustion. Add a hyphen
Coca-Cola
Besides
, deforestation and harvesting Change preposition
of trees
trees
must be controlled owing to the fact that millions of Change preposition
of trees
kilometers
of forests have been burnt, especially between Colombia and Brazil in a specific location called "Amazonia".
Change the spelling
kilometres
On the other hand
, individuals should be educated in order to be aware of environmental issues as well as
ways to reduce the damage. For instance
, in Colombia, there are many strategies for teaching about ecosystems and how to take care of them, either in schools
children learn how to recycle and sort residues or some advertisements are around the city. Among those messages to be transmitted are the importance of taking shorter showers, using recycled paper and implementing techniques like solar energy.
Add a comma
schools,
To sum up
, environmental consciousness is not only for the governments, but also
for the population, and everyone should deploy their best processes to conserve the environment as natural
as possible.Change the word
naturally
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