The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
The given maps illustrated
road
access to Use synonyms
a
urban clinic in 2007 and in 2010. Change the article
an
Overall
, the access to the Linking Words
city
hospital changed drastically with a car park not only for the workers but Use synonyms
also
for the public. Linking Words
Also
, it can be seen that there has been development for a roundabout.
Linking Words
To begin
with, in 2007, the ring Linking Words
road
Use synonyms
situated
in the north of the map and just below you can see the Add a missing verb
was situated
city
clinic is located in the centre of the ring Use synonyms
road
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, a hospital Linking Words
road
is branched from the ring Use synonyms
road
, Use synonyms
is
located to the south with Correct word choice
and is
a
six bus Correct article usage
apply
stop
. Fix the agreement mistake
stops
Additionally
, both the Linking Words
staff
Use synonyms
as well as
the general shared the same parking Linking Words
space
just next to the bus stop. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, to the south of the map, there Linking Words
were
a Change the verb form
was
city
Use synonyms
road
which branched not only the west but Use synonyms
also
the east.
Linking Words
In contrast
, in 2010, the access to the clinic Linking Words
has
completely transformed. Verb problem
was
Firstly
, the Linking Words
staff
and public car park Use synonyms
divided
into separate parking Add a missing verb
are divided
Use synonyms
space
. Fix the agreement mistake
spaces
While
Linking Words
,
the public has their parking Remove the comma
apply
space
located in the east near the hospital, the Use synonyms
staff
has their own in the east near the Use synonyms
city
Use synonyms
road
. Use synonyms
Secondly
, a bus station has been constructed to the southwest with a two roundabout. Linking Words
However
, the ring Linking Words
road
Use synonyms
as well as
the Linking Words
city
Use synonyms
road
remained the same. Through the Use synonyms
redevelopment
the problem of parking Add a comma
redevelopment,
space
Use synonyms
of
the Change preposition
for
staff
and Use synonyms
public
has changed.Correct article usage
the public
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words road, city, staff, space with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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