The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
The given maps illustrated
road
access to a
urban clinic in 2007 and in 2010. Change the article
an
Overall
, the access to the city
hospital changed drastically with a car park not only for the workers but also
for the public. Also
, it can be seen that there has been development for a roundabout.
To begin
with, in 2007, the ring road
situated
in the north of the map and just below you can see the Add a missing verb
was situated
city
clinic is located in the centre of the ring road
. Moreover
, a hospital road
is branched from the ring road
, is
located to the south with Correct word choice
and is
a
six bus Correct article usage
apply
stop
. Fix the agreement mistake
stops
Additionally
, both the staff
as well as
the general shared the same parking space
just next to the bus stop. Furthermore
, to the south of the map, there were
a Change the verb form
was
city
road
which branched not only the west but also
the east.
In contrast
, in 2010, the access to the clinic has
completely transformed. Verb problem
was
Firstly
, the staff
and public car park divided
into separate parking Add a missing verb
are divided
space
. Fix the agreement mistake
spaces
While
,
the public has their parking Remove the comma
apply
space
located in the east near the hospital, the staff
has their own in the east near the city
road
. Secondly
, a bus station has been constructed to the southwest with a two roundabout. However
, the ring road
as well as
the city
road
remained the same. Through the redevelopment
the problem of parking Add a comma
redevelopment,
space
of
the Change preposition
for
staff
and public
has changed.Correct article usage
the public
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