Some people say that television is useful in education, while others say it is useful only for entertainment. Discuss both of these views and give your opinion as to the usefulness of television as an educational tool.
The majority of
people
say that television is advantageous in education
. Other people
say it is advantageous only for enjoyment. According to
myself, it is very enjoyable. In this
essay, I will discuss both views and I give you my opinion.
On the one side, nowadays people
are used to them for entertainment
. They are
do not want to go out and they can sit and watch everything all over the ward. Unnecessary verb
apply
Therefore
they addict it. There are have variety of entertainment
. Such
as movies, and video games, all over the ward news and advertisement. Therefore
, nowadays, children and adults get addicted to it and they don't want to get good side it. For example
, some students after schools watch TV like the cartoon Tom and Jerry they don't want to do anything about another thing.
The other major case is those who start to watch television may not close it. They spend a lot of time with them. it has killed people
many times and they do not have time even with families. Therefore
, it is family bonding and love is lost. For instance
, some family's parents more
and more addicted to watching international movies. Even they bring food Add a missing verb
are more
for
out and give it to children so they watch movies. Change preposition
apply
As a result
, it is killed family bonds.in this
way, people
can have more entertainment
too.
On the other hand
, they can use it for education
it
can be more beneficial. There are a lot of Correct pronoun usage
which
education
programs and there is a lot of titers variety of subjects. For example
, these days many videos running for IELTS because it is very interesting these days. In this
way, people
can take more education
side too.
In conclusion, in this
way, people
are
can use television in many ways. In my opinion, Unnecessary verb
apply
people
use more entertainment
than education
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