The charts below give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000, and the marital status of adult Americans in two of the years.

The charts below give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000, and the marital status of adult Americans in two of the years.
The given charts illustrate the
number
changing of marriage and divorce rates in the USA between 1970 and 2000, and the situation of
marital
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marriage
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in 1970 and 2000.
Overall
, the charts indicate that the
number
of marriages is higher than the
number
of divorces,
the
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and the
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percentage of married
people
is the highest.
1From
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1 From
the first chart, the
number
of marriages is approximately double
from
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apply
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the
number
of divorces.
However
, the
number
of marriages decreases from 2.5
million
to 2
million
.
2In
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2 In
contrast, the
number
of divorces first shows an upward trend from 1
million
to about 1.5
million
,
then
the
number
of
it
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them
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decreases to 1
million
. The second chart shows that the percentage of married
people
in 1970 and 2000 is the highest, at 70% and about 60%.3The trend
of
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it
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apply
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is the same as the widowed
people
.4The divorced and
never married
Verb problem
never-married
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people
show
the
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a
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decreasing trend, which are both below 20%.
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