The charts below give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000, and the marital status of adult Americans in two of the years.
The given charts illustrate the
number
changing of marriage and divorce rates in the USA between 1970 and 2000, and the situation of marital
in 1970 and 2000.
Replace the word
marriage
Overall
, the charts indicate that the number
of marriages is higher than the number
of divorces, the
percentage of married Correct word choice
and the
people
is the highest.
1From
the first chart, the Correct your spelling
1 From
number
of marriages is approximately double from
the Change preposition
apply
number
of divorces.However
, the number
of marriages decreases from 2.5 million
to 2 million
.2In
contrast, the Correct your spelling
2 In
number
of divorces first shows an upward trend from 1 million
to about 1.5 million
, then
the number
of it
decreases to 1 Correct pronoun usage
them
million
.
The second chart shows that the percentage of married people
in 1970 and 2000 is the highest, at 70% and about 60%.3The trend of
Change preposition
apply
it
is the same as the widowed Correct pronoun usage
apply
people
.4The divorced and never married
Verb problem
never-married
people
show the
decreasing trend, which are both below 20%.Correct article usage
a
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