Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing ( for example, through cellphone tracking amd security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

There is a view which is better: that online learning comes with flexibility and with new skills ,

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and maturing competition. I agree that

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online education is more congenial learning.

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of learning online: At

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learning online offers flexibility, convenience, and

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at their own pace, from anywhere,

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it’s very functional and appropriate to carry our laptop with us on trips and utilize it for all our online studies, and they don’t have a schedule and can

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online whenever they want. Online learning can

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on the students, it’s if they are introverts we know that for them indeed essential online education because they may desire to

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. There are various advantages to offline learning.

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it allows for direct,

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interaction with tutors and peers, fostering better communication.

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allows focus without online distractions. on the secondhand interactions with classmates enhance understanding well. On the

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internet connection issues don’t disrupt the offline

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. And it can be

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off-line

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for extroverts. In conclusion, period of

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there are many pluses to studying off-line, I consider honest online education

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more convenient,

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it saves

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no matter where it is.