The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.
The plans below demonstrate the old map of an
airport
and transforming to new
state of an Add an article
a new
the new
airport
reconstructing
next Wrong verb form
reconstructed
year
Overall
, the Southwest airport's
now and after Change noun form
airport
redevelopments
next Fix the agreement mistake
redevelopment
year
vision has
several big changes and adding new services on the right side of Correct subject-verb agreement
have
map
. In Add an article
the map
this
map
main and significant redevelopments will happen Add a comma
map,
this
Change preposition
in this
airport
's downside part of the building.
On the one hand, the
southwest Correct article usage
apply
airport
's current state and the developments in the future start by increasing the departure and arrivals door
to double which Fix the agreement mistake
doors
is
previously the doors has only one entrance and exiting door Verb problem
apply
both
Correct pronoun usage
apply
of
Change preposition
apply
them
. In Correct pronoun usage
apply
this
building security passport control part has one check-in and café service, the future plan this
side of Change preposition
for this
building
will beAdd an article
the building
added
the bag drop and another two service check-in and café will be relocated to opposite down and upper corners.
Change the verb form
to add
On the other hand
, the passport control customs room currently has
not any services and after redevelopments in Verb problem
does
this
section will be added next year
, the café, ATM and the most beneficial for arrivals the car hire. After passing the security passport control next year
you will encounter some shops and the last
two changes of this
project the
figures of gates will increase from 8 to 18 and people in order to arrive Add a missing verb
are the
their
gates the walkway path will be replaced to sky train.Change preposition
at their
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structure
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introduction conclusion
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Review the use of articles (the, a, an) and prepositions (in, on, at) as small errors can detract from the clarity of your ideas.
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