The charts below show the main methods of transportation for people travelling to one university for work or study in 2004 and 2009.

The charts below show the main methods of transportation for people travelling to one university for work or study in 2004 and 2009.
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The pie chart illustrates data on the various modes of
transportation
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that people generally use to get to university between 2004 and 2009. 
Overall
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, buses and cars showed the highest percentages among all modes of
transportation
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during these years.
Moreover
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, in 2009, the number of individuals utilizing buses increased,
whereas
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the number of people using cars decreased, alongside a growth in the usage of other
transportation
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methods. The introduction of car parking charges at the university in 2006 might have decreased the number of car drivers from 51% to 28%,
while
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the construction of a new bus stop likely contributed to an
increase
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in bus users from 33% to 46%. There was
also
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a significant rise in bicycle usage, with a total
increase
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of 7%. Meanwhile, other
transportation
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methods,
such
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as walking and trains, did not show notable growth, with a 1%
increase
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for train users and a 2%
increase
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for pedestrians.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words transportation, increase with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 5 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Public transportation
  • Private vehicles
  • Sustainable transportation
  • Environmental impact
  • Commute
  • Utility
  • Infrastructure
  • Accessibility
  • Congestion
  • Carbon footprint
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