The map below shows the village of Stokeford in 1930 and in 2010.

The map below shows the village of Stokeford in 1930 and in 2010.
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The maps illustrate how a village called Stokeford has developed in 1930 and in 2010.
Overall
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, what stands out from the pictures is that there has been significant development in terms of residential areas. Regarding the maps,there was one main
road
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in 1930 and it has been added three branches.A number of houses have occupied the space
as well as
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Retirement homes along these branches where shops and gardens used to be.
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, there was the river which ran from the southwest of the village to the northeast of the area. It has intersected with the main
road
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at the top of the site and above them,the bridge was constructed which has not changed in 80 years. Another striking change is that there was farmland along the river and to the east of the main
road
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as well and they have been demolished.
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,the primary school was situated on the east of the
road
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which was not developed until 2010 and to next it,many houses have been erected.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • architectural styles
  • amenities
  • communal spaces
  • technological advancements
  • modernization
  • transportation systems
  • urbanized zones
  • local economy
  • environmental impact
  • green spaces
  • urban development
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