In the future people will read only online and no one will buy printed newspapers. to what extent do you agree od disagree?
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are tend
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tends
newspaper
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newspapers
website
or online Fix the agreement mistake
websites
portal
more than the printed version. Fix the agreement mistake
portals
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kind of issue affects the prediction about the future, there is a saying that states there are
will be no one Unnecessary verb
apply
buy
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buying
printed
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a printed
the printed
newspaper
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newspapers
few
years ahead. I personally agree with the statement that I will discuss more in the upcoming paragraphs.
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a few
To begin
with, in this
digital era, it is common to know that books, newspapers, magazines
are having their digital versions that can be viewed on the website or other online platforms. Correct word choice
and magazines
This
condition leads to the tendency that
people Change preposition
of
be
more likely Fix the infinitive
to be
read
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to read
such
readings through their gadgets. Instead
of buying the hard copy of those readings, reading the digital copy is more efficient since it is easier to access. The printed version can we
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be
get
by going to the bookstore first and I think it is Verb problem
obtained
such
a complicated way to do
.
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do it
On the other hand
, there are minority of people that
are still reading Correct pronoun usage
who
newspaper
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newspapers
by
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in
its
hard copy. Correct pronoun usage
their
Although
for some youth Fix the agreement mistake
generations
generation
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generation,
this
case is outdated, the
older people cannot deny that they feel more comfortable Correct article usage
apply
to read
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reading
newspaper
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newspapers
by
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in
its
printed version. Correct pronoun usage
their
Furthermore
, those elders are
not Verb problem
do
usual
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usually
to
operate smartphones, so it is difficult to access digital Fix the infinitive
apply
newspaper
.
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newspapers
To conclude
, the reason I agree printed newspaper
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newspapers
is
going to Correct subject-verb agreement
are
be disappear
from Change the verb form
disappear
future's
market is because Correct article usage
the future's
of
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apply
the
digital Correct article usage
apply
one
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ones
is
very Correct subject-verb agreement
are
acessible
to read. Correct your spelling
accessible
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, there is also
a community that still do
not want to change their habit Correct subject-verb agreement
does
on
reading printed Change preposition
of
newspaper
.Fix the agreement mistake
newspapers
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