The graph below shows the daily consumption of three spreads per person from 1981 to 2007 in a country.
The given graph illustrates the daily intake of three spreads per person between 1981 and 2007 in a country.
Overall
, margarine showed a fluctuation Linking Words
while
butter depicts a downward trend after 1986.
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To begin
with, butter consumption stood at 140 Linking Words
grams
in 1981. After that, it increased slightly to 160 Use synonyms
grams
. Use synonyms
However
, it Linking Words
then
constantly declined throughout the given time frame. Notably, it dropped dramatically in 1991, by 60 Linking Words
grams
. When it comes to the figure for margarine, it experienced a minor decline from around 100 Use synonyms
grams
to 80 Use synonyms
grams
in 1986. Use synonyms
Subsequently
, it recovered its amount and revelled out for the following 5 years. Linking Words
Then
, it gradually dropped and reached 40 Linking Words
grams
in the end.
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Lastly
, in 1996, Linking Words
new
product called "Low fat & reduced spreads" Add an article
a new
has
released and gained enormous popularity in the first 5 years: the consumption rose from above 20 Verb problem
was
grams
to 80 Use synonyms
grams
. Use synonyms
Although
it decreased marginally in 2007, it was the most popular spread among 3 sectors.Linking Words
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