The diagram below shows the manufacturing for making sugar from sugarcane.
The diagram indicates the manufacturing process for making
sugar
from sugarcane within seven steps by machines and man-made.
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To begin
with, on top of that, the Linking Words
sugar
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cane
grew within 12 to 18 months, Use synonyms
while
the second Linking Words
step
was divided into two ways for harvesting. One Use synonyms
step
was to use a machine which could produce a larger amount of Use synonyms
sugar
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cane
. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, the other Linking Words
step
was to make a little more Use synonyms
sugar
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cane
from man-made. Use synonyms
In addition
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this
could jump to the third Linking Words
step
which was to crush the Use synonyms
sugar
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cane
to juice status by a machine.
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Furthermore
, the fourth to seventh steps Linking Words
also
used different kinds of tools to assert workers, Linking Words
whereas
workers just only utilised various tools to help them, including using filters to purify juice, using heaters to evaporate juice to syrup, centrifugation to separate Linking Words
sugar
crystals from syrup, and dying and cooling Use synonyms
sugar
.Use synonyms
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