"Some people say that television is useful in education, while others say it is useful only for entertainment. Discuss both of these views and give your opinion as to the usefulness of television as an educational tool.

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Nowadays an increasing number of

people

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are becoming concerned about

television

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. There are two diametrically opposed opinions on the matter. Some

people

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assert that

television

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is useful

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education

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while

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others state that it is useful

obly

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only

for

entertainment

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. In the forthcoming lines of

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essay

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I shall

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discuss

duscuss

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discuss

both sides of the argument, and explain why I am in complete agreement with the

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viewpoint

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and foremost thing that some

people

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feel is that

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television

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television is

television was

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useful for

education

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people

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can learn knowledge

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television

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also

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and also

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they can

watching

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videos about

education

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. Personally, I believe that learning knowledge

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television

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is easier than other things. Nowadays it is popular

with

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apply

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all over the world.

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, it is

also

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possible to mention that it is

benefit

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only for

entertainment

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This

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view has got good and bad side.

Goodness

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The goodness

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side is if

people

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want

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relax , they can watch

television

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for

entertainment

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Badness

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side is most

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apply

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teenegers

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teenagers

spending

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more time

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watching TV. To summarize all given information and opinions, my own

opinions

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opinion

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is that there is truth in both views.

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, even though some individuals feel that it is

profit

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for

education

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, I contend

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with the

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opposing viewpoint. I personally have confidence in the opinion that TV is

advantage

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only for

entertainment

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Structure

Ensure a clear and structured introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion. Use distinct paragraphs to separate ideas.

Examples

Provide specific examples to support your points for a stronger argument.

Grammar

Pay attention to spelling, punctuation, and grammatical errors to improve clarity and readability.

Transitions

Use transition words to improve the flow between sentences and paragraphs.

Argument development

Refine your argument by discussing each viewpoint thoroughly before stating your own.

Balanced view

You presented both sides of the argument.

Clear opinion

You expressed a clear personal opinion in the conclusion.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

Paragraph 1 - Introduction

Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

217 words

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"Some people say that television is useful in education, while others say it is useful only for entertainment. Discuss both of these views and give your opinion as to the usefulness of television as an educational tool.

Fully explain your ideas

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