The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graphs illustrate how much percentage
three
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kinds of electrical products which support household chores account for and how many
hours
per
week
people spent
for
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doing
houseworks
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housework
between 1920 and 2019.
Overall
, it is clearly seen that the
figure
for the proportion of using three electrical
houseworks
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housework
house works
devices has
a
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an
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upward trend approximately over a 100-year period.
In addition
, there was
a
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an
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upward trend in the
figure
representing the
numbers
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number
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of
hours
per
week
for
houseworks
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housework
. In detail, the
figure
for
refrigerator
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refrigerators
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started
approximately
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at approximately
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nothing in 1920,
while
the
figure
for washing
machine
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machines
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and
vacuum
cleaner
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cleaners
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started at respectively 40% and 30%. There was a rapid growth in the
figure
for
refrigerator
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refrigerators
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from 5% to 100% until 1980. There was no change from 1980 to the final year in 2019. The
figure
for
vacuum
cleaner
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cleaners
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increased gradually over
a
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an
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80-year period until 2000, it stayed stable at 100% after 2000. Unlike the
figure
for refrigerator and
vacuum
cleaner, the
figure
for washing machine showed
slightly
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fluctuation.
Moreover
, the
figure
for
vacuum
cleaner
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cleaners
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did not reach
at
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100% in the final year. Turning to the
figure
for the second one, it started at 50
hours
per
week
in 1920. There was a rapid drop from 1920 to 1960 by 30
hours
per
week
afterwards. The time for household
works
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work
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per
week
remained nearly constant for 80 years between 1960 to 2019.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rapid" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • household appliances
  • time-efficient
  • labour-saving devices
  • technological innovations
  • ownership rate
  • housework chores
  • domestic workload
  • automation
  • advancements
  • trend analysis
  • societal shifts
  • economic impact
  • durability
  • lifespan of appliances
  • maintenance
  • historical comparison
  • time allocation
  • drudgery reduction
  • energy consumption
  • disruption in trends
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