The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line graphs illustrate how much percentage
three
kinds of electrical products which support household chores account for and how many Change preposition
of three
hours
per week
people spent for
doing Change preposition
apply
houseworks
between 1920 and 2019.
Correct your spelling
housework
Overall
, it is clearly seen that the figure
for the proportion of using three electrical houseworks
devices has Correct your spelling
housework
house works
a
upward trend approximately over a 100-year period. Change the article
an
In addition
, there was a
upward trend in the Change the article
an
figure
representing the numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
hours
per week
for houseworks
.
In detail, the Correct your spelling
housework
figure
for refrigerator
started Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
approximately
nothing in 1920, Change preposition
at approximately
while
the figure
for washing machine
and Fix the agreement mistake
machines
vacuum
cleaner
started at respectively 40% and 30%. There was a rapid growth in the Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
figure
for refrigerator
from 5% to 100% until 1980. There was no change from 1980 to the final year in 2019. The Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
figure
for vacuum
cleaner
increased gradually over Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
a
80-year period until 2000, it stayed stable at 100% after 2000. Unlike the Change the article
an
figure
for refrigerator and vacuum
cleaner, the figure
for washing machine showed slightly
fluctuation. Change the word
slight
Moreover
, the figure
for vacuum
cleaner
did not reach Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
at
100% in the final year.
Turning to the Change preposition
apply
figure
for the second one, it started at 50 hours
per week
in 1920. There was a rapid drop from 1920 to 1960 by 30 hours
per week
afterwards. The time for household works
per Fix the agreement mistake
work
week
remained nearly constant for 80 years between 1960 to 2019.Submitted by dmdql2708 on
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