The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004
The diagram illustrates the usage of four different foods including
chicken
, beef, lamb, and fish in one of Europe's countries in
a period of 25 years.Change preposition
over
Overall
, the chicken
needed for individuals had risen while
the other three items showed decreased trends.
According to
the line charts, it can be seen that beef was the most common food that be
Change the verb form
is
consummed
from 1979 to approximately 1987.Correct your spelling
consumed
However
,the consumption of beef decreased after 1987 while
the chicken
was getting more and more popular.It is noticeable that weekly each person consumed only about 140 grams of chicken
.And then
saw a steady increase from 1979 to 2004. It reached its peak at about 250 grams per person per week. Based on the data provided, the consumption of lamb and fish showed a decline
trend during Change the verb form
declining
this
period.
To sum up
, except for chicken
, the consumption of the other three kinds of meat showed a downward trend.Submitted by tiger801211574 on
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