The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Describe the information in the table and make comparisons where appropriate. Write at least 150 words.

The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Describe the information in the table and make comparisons where appropriate. Write at least 150 words.
The table below shows data about how different the crowds were commuting between 1985 and 2000 in England.
Overall
, the sum of using all modes in 1985 was 4,740 meanwhile the number was increasing up to 6,475, as commonly seen,
personal
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car was considered the vehicle the most used either of the years, followed by
local
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bus in the early, but
then
15 years later, the changes started appearing, user's usage was dropping significantly. On top of that, many modes of transportation existed in the past
such
as walking, bicycle,
long distance
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bus, train, taxi and the previous two mentioned,
taxi
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the taxi
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was the one accessed the least, less than others at 13,
however
, the figure was accumulating to 42 in 2000,
hence
,
bicycle
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the bicycle
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was barely applied
in
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the beginning of 20s .
Furthermore
, another interesting point was that
train
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trains
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and
long distance
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long-distance
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bus
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buses
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were accessed increasingly owing to
more
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a more
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comfortable long
journey
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journeys
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, in parallel, the number of the crowds walking was descending
as a result
of many factors.
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