the system used for rubbish collection in your local area is not working properly. this is causing problems for you and your neighbours. write a letter to the local rubbish collection system is not working properly. write a letter to the local council. in your letter describe how the ruubish collection system is not working properly explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours suugest what should be done about the problem
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to express my concern about the mass of waste which piles up in the neighbourhood every day and poses serious dissatisfaction to the local residents.
Given the circumstances, it is observed sometimes that used materials are left uncollected and bins overflow on some occasions which not only annoys dwellers but
also
questions the local council's tireless work collecting them. Moreover
, as our region is located in the central part of the city and there are some monuments nearby, therefore
, it illustrates a negative picture of the country to the tourists.
In a nutshell, its smell, as well as
possible illnesses that may emerge from that, poses discomfort to neighbours, therefore
, we kindly request you to conduct a useful plan in order to prevent this
issue from happening by allocating sufficient workforce in order to collect waste on time.
Thank you in advance for considering my request.
faithfully yours,
Ebrahimi KeyhanSubmitted by keyhan454 on
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Vocabulary/Sentence structure
Remember to use a variety of sentence structures and vocabulary to make your writing more engaging.
Detailing
Consider including specific examples or more detailed descriptions of the problems caused by the rubbish collection system to strengthen your argument.
Transitions
To enhance coherence, you could add more connectors between sentences and paragraphs, creating smoother transitions.
Structure
Effective structure with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion.
Tone
Appropriate and polite tone throughout the letter, suitable for writing to a council.
Content
Successfully conveys the main issues, effects, and suggests actions, meeting the task requirements.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite