The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
The given chart displays the figure for the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.
Overall
, it can be seen that the percentage of people
using cars experienced an upward trend while
the opposite was true with bike
and foot that of. Fix the agreement mistake
bikes
Besides
, the proportion of individuals using buses witnessed a fluctuation.
To begin
with, the figure for buses used started at 20% in 1960 and it then
increased to 27% approximately, however
, it declined to 17% in 2000. There was a considerable rise in the percentage of people
using cars which started at below 10% in 1960 and then
peaked at 37% roughly after four decades.
Moving on to the other categories, the proportion of commuter
transporting by bike and foot had a relatively similar trend. The figure for Fix the agreement mistake
commuters
people
transporting by bike began at around 27% in 1960 and then
it remarkably decreased by 20% in 2000. Lastly
, the percentage of people
travelling by foot in 1960 was highest at approximately 35%, however
, it witnessed a significant decrease of 25% after 40 years.Submitted by lethithut123 on
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