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The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
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The graph shown above illustrates the numbers of various ways
people
 travel to and from
work
 in 1960, 1980, and 200. Each
stacks
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 represents the quantity used in each specific
year
.
For instance
, blue shows the quantity during the
year
 1960, red shows the
year
 1980, and
the
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green shows the
year
 2000.
However
, as for the Y axis, let's assume that it draws the percentage of the
people
 using which specific means of transportation. Picking up from the first group of stacked
collumns
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columns
, are the numbers on how many
people
 commute using the bus. It's shown that
it's
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it
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 peaked in the
year
 1980, when
people
uses
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bus
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the bus
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 a lot more often.
Then
,
on
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in
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 the second group, it's shown that
people
 mostly use
car
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the car
a car
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 to get to
work
on
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in
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 the
year
 2000, which makes
this
 the most popular type of
accomodation
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accommodation
 used in that
year
. Moving on, the third group shows that
bike
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bikes
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is
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are
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 most often used in the
year
 1960.
Lastly
, walking on foot is the most
way
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common way
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of
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for
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people
getting
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to get
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 around to
work
and
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apply
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back in the
year
 1960. In conclusion,
this
 graph demonstrates the most popular way of commuting to
work
 and home clearly by basing it on the type of vehicle and the
year
 it's documented
from
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apply
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.
This
 data is beneficial for
people
 who
seeks
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seek
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 to use, analyze, and transform it into a report for monitoring or decision-making.
Additionally
,
this
 graph can
also
 be improved by adding even more types of
transportations
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transportation
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 to make it more comprehensive.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words people, work, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 4 times.
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