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The pie charts show the amount of money that a Kazakh charity organization spent and received in 2019.

The pie charts show the amount of money that a Kazakh charity organization spent and received in 2019.
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The given chart provides us with the
quantity
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number
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 of finances which
particular
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a particular
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 charity organisation
of
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in
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 Kazakhstan has gained and spent in the year
of
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apply
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2019.
Overall
, it is mentionable that the difference between two
compaired
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compared
 issues made up merely 200 000 dollars. Studying the first chart about the revenue source
it is clear that
 the most popular type of donation was food which occupied almost 87 percent of the whole number. The lowest income was provided by public
subsides
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subsidies
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 and
invesments
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investments
investment
 with just 0.2 % respectively.
Besides
, additional income did not make
bigger
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a bigger
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 number and counted just 0.4
percent
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per cent
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 of the funded money.
However
, community
conritbutions
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contributions
 demonstrated
better
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a better
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 rate and invested around 10%of the total number. As for
spendings
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spending
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, almost 96% of the
overall
 amount of money
were
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was
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 spent on the service concern and nearly 3% and about 2% were devoted to fundraising and
managment
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management
 correspondingly.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "provides" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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