Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter, give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre explain why the sports and leisure Centre is important for the local community describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter related to the decision made by the council members regarding the shutdown of the local club
in my town.
This
club
plays a vital role in the lives of the local people residing in the area near the club
because it is used by all groups. The sports area is usually utilized by kids and teenagers like us to play basketball and hockey, and it is also
a part of adult life due to
the presence of the GYM inside. Moreover
, elderly humans are also
observed in the club
during the evening, walking on the running track including my grandparents as well.
Sports and leisure centers
are relentlessly vital because they help people to relax by playing sports, doing exercise in GYM, and talking about important or not-so-important issues with their friends. Change the spelling
centres
Hence
, local clubs play a very important role in the physical as well as
mental well-being of people.
I think that this
club
has become the basic necessity of all the individuals in the area as per their preferences. Unfortunately, if the club
gets closed, the lives of residents of this
town will be affected negatively and they will be quite disappointed with the decision of the local council.
I do not want the club
to get shut down. I request you to think once again about your decision. I hope you understand.
Yours sincerely,
Navneet Kaur.Submitted by ss6802125 on
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Task achievement
Try to expand on the possible effects of the centre's closure on the local people with more specific examples or consequences to strengthen your argument.
Coherence & Cohesion
To improve the single idea per paragraph, make sure each paragraph focuses on a clear, distinct point. This will enrich the logical flow of your argument.
Coherence & Cohesion
Consider using a wider range of cohesive devices and transition words to enhance the flow between sentences and paragraphs.
Task achievement
Your letter provides a good overview of how the sports and leisure centre is used by different age groups, effectively addressing part of the task.
Task achievement
Your tone throughout the letter is suitably formal and polite, which is appropriate for writing to a local council.
Coherence & Cohesion
The logical structure of your letter, including the greeting and closing, is commendably clear and adheres to the conventions of letter writing.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite