The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.
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The chart below compares the number of
households
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living in the US
according to
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their yearly salary in three years.
Overall
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, it is noticeable that
households
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with incomes ranging from 50,000 to 99,999 had roughly stayed the same in all provided years,
whereas
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there had been changes in the other groups. Looking at 2007, The vast majority of
households
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had an income below 75,000,
While
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28 million
households
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earned over 100,000. By 2011, more
households
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earned less than 49,000
in contrast
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to 2007.
Furthermore
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, income levels between 50,000 to 99,000 approximately stayed the same. The number of those who earned 100,000 or more, dropped slightly in comparison to the earlier reported year. In 2015, most of the
households
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(33 million) earned 100,000 or more annually.
Although
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there were no major differences between 2015 and the earlier years, the group which had a yearly salary of 75,000 to 99,000 had a slightly higher number, reaching 15 million.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words households with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economic landscape
  • Household income
  • Economic health
  • Income brackets
  • Trends
  • Inflation
  • Unemployment rates
  • Job market
  • Income disparity
  • Housing affordability
  • Access to education
  • Quality of life
  • Economic policies
  • Income inequality
  • Mitigating
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