The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart compares the quantity of rented and owned real-estate property in England and Wales in the
year
1918 and almost a century later in 2011.
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Overall
, it may be seen that the number of Linking Words
the
rented Correct article usage
apply
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accomodation
was mentionable higher till 1971, Correct your spelling
accommodations
while
since that Linking Words
year
the percentage of owned homes accelerated significantly.
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Furthermore
, in 1918 the proportion of rented Linking Words
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accomodation
to self-owned Correct your spelling
accommodation
one
was almost Fix the agreement mistake
ones
with
around 22% and almost 80% respectively. Change preposition
apply
However
, in 1961 Linking Words
this
trend changed and the number of owned houses made up 40% and less than 60% percent of the Linking Words
overall
number were occupied by the tenants.
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year
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of
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apply
1981
there was a leap Add a comma
1981,
of
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in
housholds
in owned Correct your spelling
households
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accomodation
. Since Correct your spelling
accommodation
then
, the percentage of Linking Words
the
possessed homes Correct article usage
apply
was
higher during the whole remaining period. Twenty years later, in 2001 the rate of rented Wrong verb form
has been
houshold
was the lowest and occupied merely 31 %, Correct your spelling
household
households
while
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this
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year
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demostrated
the highest proportion of the owned Correct your spelling
demonstrated
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accomodation
. By the end of Correct your spelling
accommodation
studying
period, the difference between Correct article usage
the studying
two
compared issues made up around 30% with 64% of the Correct article usage
the two
housholds
in owned Correct your spelling
households
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accomodation
and 36% Correct your spelling
accommodation
of
lessees.Change preposition
in
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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