The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2006 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2006 and the present day.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two maps depict the transformation of a college campus from 2006 to the present.
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, significant infrastructure improvements have occurred, particularly in expanding accommodation facilities and academic buildings.
However
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this
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progress has led to the loss of some natural spaces. In 2006, the campus featured two accommodation halls on the west side, with an office to the north. Opposite
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administrative house were three interconnected teaching blocks serving both the Arts and Sciences departments. A central landscape with a lake, lawns, and seating areas provided spaces for relaxation. Shops and restaurants were clustered in the southeast. Today, major alternations have taken place. The southwest residence has been replaced by a modern services complex, and an additional dormitory has been built behind the northwest one. An old office building has been replaced by a new one for the Science departments, and the teaching complex has been rebuilt for the Arts. Unfortunately, most green areas, including the lake surroundings and southeast shops, have been cleared for a new residential hall, leaving only the lake intact. In summary, the campus has undergone remarkable renovation, with improved infrastructure but at the
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of natural spaces.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • campus
  • renovation
  • infrastructure
  • facilities
  • sustainable
  • accessibility
  • layout
  • pedestrian zones
  • transportation routes
  • parking facilities
  • greenery
  • sports center
  • lecture halls
  • demolition
  • modernize
  • expansion
  • enhancement
  • comprehensive development
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