The table and pie chart illustrate populations in Australia according to different nationalities and areas. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table and pie chart illustrate populations in Australia according to different nationalities and areas. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given table and the pie chart show the proportion of the Australian' population
according to
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six nationalities and two kinds of areas.
Overall
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, it clearly be seen that the majority of Australia's residents are Australian.
Moreover
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, only a small portion of its residents live in the countryside. In terms of the three largest proportions of nationalities, Australians are the biggest in their own home at almost three-quarters of its total population and four-fifths of them stay in the city
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the rest live in the countryside. The second highest was others at 14% followed by British accounted for 7% with 89% of its people living in the city. Regarding the other three with a lower percentage, the nationality of New Zealander, Chinese, and Dutch only contributes to the total of 6% with 3%, 2%, and 1%, respectively.
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, 99% of Chinese live in the city making it the highest, the second is New Zealander stands at 90%, and the Dutch makes up 83%.
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