The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bircks for the building industry. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.
The diagram presents the process of how brick is manufactured and prepared for delivery.
Overall
, it is clear that
there are eight stages in the production of brick. The process begins with digging clay and ends at the delivery stage
Looking at the first stage
of brick manufacturing, clay is dug up by a digger. This
clay will be sieved by a metal grid to get rid of some unaccepted particles and move along with
a roller. Sand and water are added before a mix gets in a mould, then
it is cut into a box which is now called Correct word choice
and then
bricks
. Bricks
will be put in a drying oven to decrease the moisture for 24-48 hours.
Afterwards, these dried bricks
will be relocated to a kiln to proceed 3 more steps which are moderate temperature, at 200-900 degrees celsius
, high temperature, at 870-1300 degrees Capitalize word
Celsius
celsius
and a cooling chamber. Cutting Capitalize word
Celsius
bricks
need to be kept in this
cooling chamber for about 2 or 3 days. Finally
, piles of bricks
will be packed and ready for delivery.Submitted by nnatthinee on
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