Computers and AI technology are increasingly being used for online education. Can artificial intelligence enhance the learning experiences? Is this a positive or negative development?
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study
environment, which has transformed how learners study
through increased activities. In my opinion, using
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computers
and AI can be used to gain more learning experience and this
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has
negative
impact because of depending too much on technology.
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, learners currently research a lot of lessons and answers in
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study
more after school hours. Moreover
, computers
and AI are good tools for students to improve their learning skills and experience and make them more self-made and critical thinking
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thinkers
For example
, students in China always learn by themselves without asking teachers because of the benefits of computers
and AI.
Another argument worth considering is that computers
and AI cause drawbacks due to
overgoing dependence on improving learning abilities. That is
to say, inviduals
that rely on AI and Correct your spelling
individuals
computers
always research informations
on the Internet to solve problems and not learn by themselves. Change the wording
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, it can transform intelligences
into know-nothing.
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and improve their learning experiences.Submitted by khoi11nk11e on
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