The graph below shows the percentage of female students on four different courses at one university from 1970 to 2015.
The graph illustrates the proportion of different courses of female students at one university with
5 year
intervals, starting from 1970 to 2015.
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5-year
According to
the figure, it can be seen that computer science is popular at first and then
it is surpassed by law almost throughout the period. However
, female students are also
interested in medicine
in one of the periods.
Computer science occupied 27% in the first year and then
continuously increased to just under 75% in 1990. Afterwards, it nosedived and level
off at roughly 55% in 2005. A noticeable fall to 35% was seen again in 2015. Wrong verb form
levelled
On the other hand
, law
that started at the lowest pointAdd an article
a law
the law
,
was about 10% in 1970, surged to a peak at 90% in 2000 and moderately swung to well under 100% in 2015.
Remove the comma
apply
Physic
and Fix the agreement mistake
Physics
Medicine
had the same trajectory from 1970, at 30% and 20%, to 1985, at 45% and 35% consecutively. In 1990, medicine
shot up and overcame physic
by 10% and it still climbed up to just under 75% Fix the agreement mistake
physics
while
physic
hovered at 55%. Replace the word
physics
Moreover
, both physic
and Replace the word
physics
medicine
soared together and ended the period at well over 90% and around 85% respectively.Submitted by nnatthinee on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words medicine, physic with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
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