More and more people want to buy clothes, cars and other items from famous brands. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
There has been much debate
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about whether
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brands
to buy clothes and other things. Use synonyms
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new trend is a direct consequence of strong advertising campaigns from huge companies and influencers. In my Linking Words
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tendency is bound to destroy smaller businesses and can bring more negative consequences than positive ones.
First and foremost, big companies in order to make profits promote their shiny products through intense advertisements, with the help of various influencers, celebrities and famous sportsmen. Linking Words
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choosing between sellers based on the ads they see on the internet or other social media platforms. in order to follow the new trends brought by celebrities. Use synonyms
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as a result
, many of his followers will buy.
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trend most definitely will have a negative impact on society and most importantly, small businesses that are desperately looking for new customers. Linking Words
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brands
are not able to allocate big budgets to advertisements and Use synonyms
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, society will not be informed about the products these smaller companies sell and will not be able to buy them. Linking Words
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people
may feel unsatisfied with their lives, when they are not able to afford lavish products from famous Use synonyms
brands
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As a result
, they may end up depressed or negatively impacted in other ways. Linking Words
For example
, individuals could struggle with financial problems when they spend all of their budget on popular Linking Words
brands
, which often cost a staggering amount of money.
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brands
for many different reasons. Use synonyms
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