this diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. summarize the information and make a comparison . write at least 150 words.

this diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. summarize the information and make a comparison . write at least 150 words.
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The diagram illustrates the process of instant
noodles
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manufacture and preparing for sale on the market.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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there are eight stages before the instant
noodles
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are made. The manufacturing starts with storage silos and ends with labelling and sealing cups. Looking
at the first stage
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of the cup noodle production, the flour from other sources is put into storage silos. When the time for mixing comes, the flour will be mixed with water and oil
then
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the mix is transferred and spread by a roller which makes the dough into a sheet. Afterwards, a cutting machine cut the dough sheets from the previous stage into dough strips. In the fifth stage, they will be sent to a curling machine to turn the strips into discs before getting into the cooking process which they will be fried with high-temperature oil and
then
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taken out for drying to extract excessive oil from the
noodles
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. Cooked
noodles
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will be put in the cups and mixed with vegetables and spices in a seasoning process.
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, instant noodle cups pass through the machine for labelling and sealing to prepare for delivery.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words noodles with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • manufactured
  • ingredients
  • dough
  • steamed
  • texture
  • flavor
  • cutting
  • shaping
  • dehydration
  • frying
  • cooling
  • seasoning
  • packaging
  • distribution
  • technological advancements
  • time-saving techniques
  • traditional noodle-making
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