The diagram below gives the information about the Hawaiian island chain in the centre of the Pacific Ocean. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown. Write at least 150 words.
The map illustrates
about
the formation of Change preposition
apply
Hawaiian
island chain in the Pacific Add an article
the Hawaiian
a Hawaiian
Ocean
through series
of geographical events.
It can be seen that in the present Correct article usage
a series
times
there are five major Add a comma
times,
island
, which have been developed from multiple eruption processes within Change to a plural noun
islands
Correct article usage
the pacific
pacific
plates.
Comprises of eight major islands namely Hawaii, Maui, Kahoolawe, Lanai, Molokai, Oahu, Kauai and Niihau, the collection of Hawaiian archipelagos in the Pacific Capitalize word
Pacific
Ocean
was initially
marked by the formation of the volcanic mountain 80 million years ago. Through a consecutive series of eruptions that are
occurred at Unnecessary verb
apply
the
depth of 2,883 kilometres beneath the sea surface, they eventually Correct article usage
a
form
several Hawaiian islands. Specifically, the eruption takes place in the solid dense rock area which contains the static ‘hot spot’ spume. As the eruption Wrong verb form
formed
begin
numerous Change the verb form
begins
time
, the hot spot area will Fix the agreement mistake
times
be fluctuated
, resulting in the induction of the magma spume. Wrong verb form
fluctuate
Subsequently
, the magma spume will be pushed to the surface until it cracks the pacific
plates, which later develops Capitalize word
Pacific
young
volcano and Correct article usage
a young
form
an island.
As the Pacific Correct subject-verb agreement
forms
Ocean
has seven until
nine centimetres Change preposition
to
movements
of Pacific plates annually, it Change preposition
of movements
consequently
leads to the shift of the formed islands, which finally
make them sprawling across the Pacific Ocean
that can be seen in the present times.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words ocean with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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