The Graph shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kindom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

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the rate of carbon dioxide emissions per

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person among four different countries from 1967 to 2007.

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both Italy and Portugal had an upward trend

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had a downward trend during four decades. In 1967, the

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stood at the highest amount of carbon dioxide emission(10.3

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with 8.2

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had the second stage and the Italian saw

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stage with 4.1

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the

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amount was for the Portuguese which was under 2

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of carbon emissions. During

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decade the

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experienced a slight decrease to 10.1 metric

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, Italy and Portugal showed a remarkable surge to 6.2 and 3.5

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respectively.

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tremendous growth and peaked at 11 metric

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. In

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decade, the

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had a minimal decline of 10

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,

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experienced a considerable drop from 11 to 7

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. Both Italy and Portugal illustrate a moderate rise with 7 and 3

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respectively. From 1987 to 1997, Italy and Portugal followed an

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increase

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trend( 7.8 and 5

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the

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decreased

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constantly. Between 1997 to 2007, the

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Italians with 7.8

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and the Portuguese with 5

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remained at the same level

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dipped by 1

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gradually.