The Graph shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kindom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

The line graph

comparisons

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the rate of carbon dioxide emissions per

each

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person among four different countries from 1967 to 2007.

It is clear that

both Italy and Portugal had an upward trend

while

the

UK

had a downward trend during four decades. In 1967, the

UK

stood at the highest amount of carbon dioxide emission(10.3

tons

)

Sweden

with 8.2

tons

had the second stage and the Italian saw

third

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stage with 4.1

tons

.

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the

fewest

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amount was for the Portuguese which was under 2

tons

of carbon emissions. During

first

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decade the

UK

experienced a slight decrease to 10.1 metric

tons

however

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, Italy and Portugal showed a remarkable surge to 6.2 and 3.5

tons

respectively.

Sweden

had

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tremendous growth and peaked at 11 metric

tons

. In

second

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decade, the

UK

had a minimal decline of 10

tons

also

,

Sweden

experienced a considerable drop from 11 to 7

tons

. Both Italy and Portugal illustrate a moderate rise with 7 and 3

tons

respectively. From 1987 to 1997, Italy and Portugal followed an

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increase

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trend( 7.8 and 5

tons

)

whereas

the

UK

and

Sweden

decreased

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1

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tons

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constantly. Between 1997 to 2007, the

Italianwith7.8

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Italians with 7.8

tons

and the Portuguese with 5

tons

remained at the same level

while

the

UK

and

Sweden

were

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dipped by 1

tons

gradually.