Some people prefer to get up early in the morning and start the day’s work. Others prefer to get up later in the day and work until late at night. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
Some choose to be an early morning person and do their chores
in
during the Change preposition
apply
day
because they find it relaxing to finish everything beforehand and spend the late parts of the day
freely, while
others wake up late and handle their work
at night
because their brain works better at night
. I prefer getting up earlier than others so that I have enough time
to cross things of
my list and have some leisure Replace the word
off
time
after.
Many can not sleep early at night
because their sleep schedule has never been based on getting a good night
's sleep. Doing the work
and the chores at night
may be preferable to those who are night
owls and are more productive under silent conditions. For example
, CEO
of the clothing brand Marks & Spencer once stated that her mind opens at Correct article usage
the CEO
night
and all the unique ideas she have
found Change the verb form
has
came
into her mind at dark hours. Wrong verb form
come
However
, I do not find staying up late at night
healthy because we need to produce enough melatonine
hormone to have a balanced hormonal system and Correct your spelling
melatonin
by
not sleeping at the Change preposition
apply
time
we supposed
to sleep naturally can have negative impacts on our body in the long run.
Others choose to get up with the sun and cross things off Add a missing verb
are supposed
in
their lists so that they can have enough Change preposition
apply
time
to spend with their family and friends. We all have chores or work
to do and in order to live a happy life, we need to both handle our responsibilities and do social activities at the same time
. Take majority of the business managers, for example
, they choose to start the day
at 5 AM and finish all the work
-related tasks they have to do by 3 PM, and by doing this
, they create enough time
to relax, do some exercise, meet with their friends and have some time
with their children. I think this
is the best way of programming our time
considering the majority of the individuals we want to spend time
with are awake during the day
.
To conclude
, although
staying up late can be beneficial to those who their
brain only Correct pronoun usage
whose
work
better at times when the Moon is up, I think because of the benefits of the sleep hormone our body supposed
to produce and the extra Add a missing verb
is supposed
time
we need to rest, waking up early and starting the day
is the best way to both do the things we have to do and have opportunity to enjoy life.Submitted by :DDDDD on
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In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite