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The chart below gives information about the growth of urban population in certain parts of the world including the prediction of the future. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about the growth of urban population in certain parts of the world including the prediction of the future. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates data on how the number of people in cities increased from 1950 to 2000 and how much it will be in 2030
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 the anticipation.
Overall
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, what stands out from the graph is that the urban population was the highest in Latın America and the Caribbean and it is predicted that it will remain first in 2030. Looking into detail,the figure for the whole world was one-third in 1950 after which it increased gradually and reached just under half.The projection shows that the share of urban residents in 2030 in the entire world will be twice as much as that in 1950 and will stand at 60%.The figures for Africa and Asia were approximately the same in 1950 at around one-tenth.
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 the former is expected to rise fivefold and reach just above 50%,
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 the estimation,the latter will stand at about 55%. Regarding the remaining part of the world,the percentage of city inhabitants in Latin America was the highest with a little more than 40%,after which it is predicted to grow substantially and finish at four-fifths

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "according to".
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stands" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban population
  • future predictions
  • historical data
  • urbanization trends
  • rates of growth
  • developed countries
  • developing countries
  • economic development
  • migration
  • government policies
  • upward trend
  • pace of urbanization
  • catching up
  • comparative analysis
  • regional differences
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