Many people in poor countries die from diseases that are curable because they cannot afford the medication required. Do you believe that drug companies should make their products available at reduced prices in these countries? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

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innocent

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have perished in

third world

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countries every day. Common diseases that can be remedied are taking away

lives

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due to

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the fact that these people are unable to afford

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drugs

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the drugs

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they require. In my essay, I will delve into why I believe that pharmaceutical

companies

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should reduce their

price

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tag for

drugs

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being sold to poorer

nations

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and provide my explanations for them.

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, citizens of poor countries are dying at an alarming rate

due to

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curable diseases. These common diseases, like flu, are curable by simple medication which is how people of richer countries

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with them on a day-to-day basis. The

price

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of

drugs

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makes even the most common disease seem like a death sentence.

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, despite

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sad plight, no action has been taken by these large multinational pharmaceutical

companies

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to reduce the

price

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of

drugs

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that are being supplied to those poorer

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due to

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the fear of negative financial implications.

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, it is reported by Fox News that the American company

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Pfizer has refused to reduce the

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as they are concerned with their share prices at the stock market if their products are associated with cheap rates. Adding on, I believe,

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the heart of a pharmaceutical corporation, helping people should be helm as an utmost priority above profits.

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their drug products to be sold cheaper, will help save many millions of

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. As a bonus,

this

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action will most certainly help build their reputation status.

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, in 2008, a pilot project led by Singaporean drug company, Reddot, sold their

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at an incredible discount of 90%,

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poorer

nations

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like Senegal and Tongo to aid them fight off their mosquito season which took away half a million

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in the previous year.

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project, received applause from various governments across the globe, especially in the home country of Singapore, which injected one million dollars into the company as an amount to

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support the project. In conclusion, I believe that

lives

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are more important than profit margins for

companies

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that are afraid of being

labeled

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cheap. Reduced rates of selling

drugs

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especially

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to those who really need them is vital in saving

lives

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.

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, I encourage all drug

companies

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across the world to step in and save

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, especially

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those in poorer

nations

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.