The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.
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The pie chart compares what one university’s Anthropology students did after completing their undergraduate degrees,
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the given table provides information about how much money they earned after 5 years.
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, it is evident that the majority of graduates had full-time work, with the Government sector having most of the employees who made at least $100,000. Looking at the data, the figure for full-time work accounted for 52% of the total. The proportions of graduates who work part-time and are unemployed represented 12 and 15 % respectively, compared with those who study full-time postgraduate and postgraduate
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working part-time, they were just under one-tenth. There is no information about the remaining 8%. Moving on to their salaries, 80% of freelance consultants earned at least $75,00,0 and half of them made over $100,000.
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, again 80% of the government sector was in the high salary range, with at least 75,000 and most of them had $100,000+ income. 20% of both employment’s earnings were lower than $75,000, ranging between $25,000 and $74,999. With regard to private companies, 55% of them made a minimum of $75,000, with almost half of them having a $25,000-74,999 salary.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • anthropology graduates
  • undergraduate degree
  • part-time work
  • full-time work
  • postgraduate study
  • unemployment
  • career trends
  • employment opportunities
  • flexibility
  • specialization
  • competitive job market
  • salary
  • earning potential
  • private sector
  • government sector
  • freelance work
  • public policy
  • cultural preservation
  • consulting
  • corporate anthropology
  • expertise
  • accrued
  • distribution
  • sector
  • trend
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