The map below shows two potential locations for a shopping mall in the city of Brandfield. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The map illustrates two potential sites for the construction of a new shopping mall in the city of Brandfield.

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one is situated to the north,

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two is to the southeast of town. The most notable observation upon first analysing the map

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is the river that flows from the north, next to the first

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, onto the southwest part of town.

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, the proposed area is next to a residential estate and just above the city centre.

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, excellent transportation is near the location

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as roads and railways, which makes

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a suitable option.

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, the second location is

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close to the CBD,

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, is it near an industrial estate.

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this

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location shares a correlation with

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one, as it

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has good modes of transport nearby; roads and railways.

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, both options show potential for the construction of a shopping mall.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words site with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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2 paragraphs

151 words

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shopping mall
city center
suburbs
accessibility
public transportation
congestion
local businesses
economic impact
environmental considerations
infrastructure
urban planning
development
consumer behavior
green spaces
residential area

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The map below shows two potential locations for a shopping mall in the city of Brandfield. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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