The map below shows two potential locations for a shopping mall in the city of Brandfield. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates two potential sites for the construction of a new shopping mall in the city of Brandfield.
Overall
, site
one is situated to the north, whereas
site
two is to the southeast of town.
The most notable observation upon first analysing the map,
is the river that flows from the north, next to the first Remove the comma
apply
site
, onto the southwest part of town. Moreover
, the proposed area is next to a residential estate and just above the city centre. Furthermore
, excellent transportation is near the location such
as roads and railways, which makes this
a suitable option. Furthermore
, the second location is also
close to the CBD, however
, is it near an industrial estate. In addition
to this
, this
location shares a correlation with site
one, as it also
has good modes of transport nearby; roads and railways. Thus
, both options show potential for the construction of a shopping mall.Submitted by jessicajreichel on
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