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the table below gives information about the three countries with the highest populations. Summarize the information and make a comparison. write 150 words.

the table below gives information about the three countries with the highest populations. Summarize the information and make a comparison. write 150 words.
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The given chart illustrates how inhabitants changed in 3 countries namely
China
, India and the United States
Overall
, it can be seen that
China
 has the largest number of residents
while
 the smallest
of
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population
 is the USA. At
the
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first glance,
China
 rose their inhabitants by 0,39 % and reached
at
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1,415
billions
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of
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inhabitants with a density per person was 151.
Also
, land acquisition was 9.388 million kilometres
square
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and the urban public was 58% in
China
.
Besides
, despite the percentage of India
was
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 higher than
China
one
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at 1,11%, the total
its
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population
 was about 100 persons lower than
China
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. But the density of each person was 455
square
 kilometres.
Additionally
, the land area was 2,973
square
kilometers
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 with 32% total urban
population
, ranked
the
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 lowest position.
Otherwise
,
American
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 grew
up
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their community by 0,71% in 2017 and the density per person was 36
square
kilometers
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, ranked
lowest
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positon
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 compared to the other 2 countries.
Hence
, the land area was 9,147 and
urban
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population
up
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 to
highest
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the highest
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 at 83%
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