Is is often said that government spend too much money on project to protect wildlife, while there are other problems that are more important. Do you agree or disagree?

it is common to express that the

goverment

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government

have

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spent a lot of

money

on projects to preserve

wildlife

,

while

there are many civilians that believe that there are other aspects that are crucial.

This

essay agrees that there are more important problems to resolve in

society

because there are hundreds and hundreds of

children

starving, and elderly people who lack

of

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medical

attention

. One of the main problems that

society

has

it

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that many

children

are dying from starvation because many parents are unable to pay for

food

to

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their kids. It is

crutial

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crucial

critical

that the

goverment

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government

pays

attention

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more attention

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to

society

's poverty than

wildlife

because

children

have the right to be protected and

feeded

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by

this

nation.

Also

,

goverment

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government

needs to invest a lot of

money

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on

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free

food

programs to cover

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kids

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basic

necesities

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necessities

to make sure our future generations will be able to be functional in

society

.

For instance

, in the United States, there are free

food

stamps for all families that make less

money

and need

food

or clothing, so they can provide

to

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their

children

what

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they need. Another important aspect that

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goverment

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government

needs to pay

attention

is

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elderly

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the elderly

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population because the vast majority have no medical

attention

, and

this

is more important than

protect

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wildlife

.

Firstly

, seniors are an important part of our

society

because they have worked for

this

country and they

deserved

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to be protected by the

goverment

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government

. If they are left behind, our young adolescents might feel

discourage

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to work harder for their future because they will see they are not well

value

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. To illustrate

this

, in Anaheim California, the vast majority of elderly people are covered by social security funds that cover their

food

expenses and medical needs.

To conclude

,

wildlife

is not more important than

children

and elderly people, so the

goverment

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government

needs to invest more

money

on

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food

and medical programs to protect those who are in need, so

this

way we will protect the most important lives in our

society

.