The graph below shows the number of library books read by boys and girls at Starmouth School from 2006 to the present.
The two line graphs give information about the comparison of books read by
women
and men in Starmouth School Library from 2009 to 2012.
Overall
, it can be seen that female students spend their time more on reading compared to males. Furthermore
, there was a similar year
in which both genders reached the same number of books to read.
To begin
with, in 2009, there were around 25 females allocated their time for
reading a book; Change preposition
to
this
figure increased gradually, crossed the same number with males in 2011, and hit its peak at the end
of the year
with 140 women
.
On the other hand
, men started higher than women
for reading, with approximately 50 students. This
trend rapidly increased before reaching its lowest point in 2012, with 80 men. While
male pupils started higher in their first year
, it was overtaken by women
in the final year
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